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- Original: Late last summer, subscribers to Harper’s Bazaar received slimmer than usual September issues with the androgynous British model Agyness Deyn on the cover.Edit: Late last summer, subscribers to Harper’s Bazaar received slimmer-than-usual September issues with the androgynous British model Agyness Deyn on the cover.
- Original: As physicality disappears, so to does the need to fly dead trees around the world.Edit: As physicality disappears, so too does the need to fly dead trees around the world.
- Original: After being publicly shamed, McCain acquiesced to Byrd’s request.Edit: After being publicly shamed, McCain submitted to Byrd’s request.
- Original: Suggestion for better text here: “Your computer shit the bed. Sorry about that.”Edit: Suggestion for better text here: “Your computer shat the bed. Sorry about that.”
- Original: It seems a little silly to say I shutdown the computer because of a problem.Edit: It seems a little silly to say I shut down the computer because of a problem.
- Original: And here’s some other weird anecdotesEdit: And here’re some other weird anecdotes
- Original: was wasEdit: was
